8.14.2011

forward

A
thought
a
lot
a
weight
off
my
shoulders.

1 comments:

Anonymous said...

I REALLY REALLY like this. The whole concept of having a thought that is so perfect that you need to carry it out to completion is beautiful. And the way you're able to put that message into a poem this short is inspiring. I admire your work here and I hope you go far.

Put yourself out there, you're brilliant.

-Eric